Chapter 35
From the depths of Hades
Upon arriving home, John immediately noticed the bathroom light was on. There didn't appear to be anyone up there, but he began to act strange. For some reason, I could not ascertain, he began to worry about the light being on in that room. “It's never on,” he said, “and look at what time it is.” He then sat at the top of the stoop and began to contemplate the situation.
“Wait a minute,” John says before entering the house. A few minutes later, he comes out with a nice chunk of blonde hash and his new reefer pipe.
“I was looking for this piece of hash before we left tonight.”
“Where was it?”
“It was on the nightstand next to my bed. Thank God my mother didn't go in there.”
“Yeah, I guess that's why they call it dope,” I said in a spaced-out voice.
John then put the piece of hash into the pipe, and we began smoking. I was coughing like I had Tuberculosis and loving every minute of it.
"This is awesome," I declared in a nasal tone. "I really think it's going to intensify the high."
It's not easy talking to someone when you're holding in a lungful of smoke.
After taking roughly eight deep tokes on the metal pipe, John says, “I don't feel so good.”
“Just take it easy, man,” I reassured him.
“No way, something is wrong.” He then runs to the backyard, and I follow behind.
“Seriously, you gotta calm down.”
He ignored me as he dug his hands into the garden and proceeded to bury the pot pipe. Standing there emotionless, I watched as a glorious piece of hash met its demise.
“Maybe he was right,” I thought. While John walked around in circles, wondering why he was alive, I, on the other hand, decided to play the game.
It was at this moment that I began to examine the driveway. I gazed down at the mysterious shape with eyes peering and found that a form of serpent writing had been scrawled inside it. There is indelible evidence that evil most certainly exists in our plain of time, and now the magic transcript was glowing with reason. In my heart, I felt as though I were an archaeologist who had just uncovered a missing artifact from the bowels of Hell itself.
If it were let’s say, a lost document from a timeless ledger, or an actual inscription from the land below, then by the depths of Hades, why was I allowed to bear witness unto it? As I looked deeply into an enigma, the murky veil was removed, and the scroll came to life.
Like a blind man able to see, the vision was totally unobscured.
Within the lucid fabric of their own genes, they all bore a distinctive trait that controlled them and kept them together as one, though they were many.
Letters of havoc, written in tide... Under pressure, I guess.
The encrypted doctrine was becoming sharper in image, and I could feel my heart shifting into new gears. No mortal on earth would be able to crack the code on this baby, I thought as my mind ran in circles above me.
This just in:
“A teenager on Staten Island has stumbled upon what appears to be one of Lucifer's many diabolical manuscripts. Can you tell us something about the baneful image that appeared to you just hours before dawn on this seemingly quiet street?”
“Certainly, Jim. Me and my friend here had just returned from an outing when I looked down to find this unusual formation. Honestly, I wasn't sure what to make of it at first, but as it continued to grow stronger from within, I began to study the nature of its indecisiveness. Odd as that may seem, I felt like a clairvoyant whose power had just been summoned.”
“Did you observe it in its earliest stage?”
“Yes, I did, Jim. I believe it first started in the form of a helix or a three-dimensional curve, and from there, it progressed into what can only be described as a menagerie of anatomical heresy.”
“There you have it, ladies and gentlemen. The men standing behind me are from the Pentagon, and it seems they've flown a chopper in to pull it out. They're going to examine it to make sure it's not a hoax before flying it back to the compound in Washington. From there, it will be moved to an undisclosed location where it will undergo further observation, and one day in the near future, perhaps they’ll have an answer they can all share with us. Now, back to you, Roger.”
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But was there a deeper meaning in Miranda's crystal ball?
Could the chemical formula within the elixir of life prove to be as acrid as an epitaph of mourning?
Or was the Whip-poor-will weeping, merely singing a tune for thee?
This I pondered near a red maple.
As I gathered and collected thoughts to be sorted out at a later date, I made a promise to the wind that I would figure this one out, not knowing that the answer to all things was merely the beginning of more problems. Like Sherlock Holmes, I stood there, eagerly intent on knowing, but what was I trying to know? This, I thought cunningly, and it made the whole world seem like one big game of detective.
The Endd - Come on in to my world
I wish I had the pipe right now, I thought. That Peterson briar was a smoker’s dream. With a pouch full of Middleton’s cherry and a matchbook or two, I'd be in heaven. Getting down on both knees, I could see what was starting to happen here.
So subtle and crafty is the shark that lies in wait. The martyr in the midst of life. The feral bloody tooth.
As I watched the insidious strands parlay in the white mirror, I wondered if they were nothing more than the devil’s own greed.
With two fingers, I gently caressed the top of the hardened mortar pad, held in place by years of intense struggle. Who could have thought that on this winsome night, I would become obsessed with the underworld and things that moved about in dark places?
Basically, I was trying to descend from my trip in the most awesome way possible, and so I convinced myself to accept it as fact.
How long before they overflowed into the next pad, spreading their pestilence within dense realms of containment while formulating an inimitable strategy for escape? Should the virile progeny emerge to besmirch the evening air, let us then pray they may eschew the rays of sunlight. Heaven help us, should the uninvited come crawling out of my altered reality and into the narrow orifice of a penile urethra. Should they decide to spawn within the comfort of man's awaiting bladder, (like the vampire fish of the Amazon River basin) then society as we currently know would be doomed to extinction, forcing us all to live life from out of the horrifying pages of a crazed H.P. Lovecraft novel.
Hereunto, we have arisen triumphantly. Tomorrow, we trade our salubrious smiles for impassioned tears.
When the psychical world of shadows attempts to invade the quiet space that resides within the sanctity of your apperception, they lead you to believe it is a welcoming party; it is not. In reality, it is a search and rescue mission that eventually uncovers a multitude of corpses, and once you let them in, they begin to breed despair.
Effortlessly and without care, they instinctively swarm the enclosure.
Like a million boa constrictors in an enormous vat of quicksand, they scatter, as would leeches in a stagnant swamp if human bait had suddenly been lowered. Slow moving with a hint of apprehension, but it was growing. They were growing. Such as the worm pulled apart would grow anew; similar in nature was the intrepid creature who slithered like a virus in its quadrel cage of stone. Procuring their sanctions were they of their own volition to ensure their defenses would not be breached.
These herpetoid dwellers, if given a chance, could paralyze the world of science and bring down with it a host of quantum laws.
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In a vain attempt to keep righteous order in their own world, they thrust forward and pulled back. Calculating equations without error and tenuously excreting themselves to form their own supreme dynasty.
There is no need to fight over territorial demesne.
Still, they manage to incorporate a fluent but graceful air about themselves. It is one of the things that make them truly unique.
Without further analysis, the scornful image reflected a magnitude of contempt by continuing to disseminate throughout the entire sector.
Like a hoard of mad dictators, they weaseled their way in and took over that block, as Hitler would have taken over America and destroyed us.
With no one to stop them, it was theirs for the taking.
As my awkward shadow touched the perimeter of their communal nest, they went into a mad frenzy. Eventually, they would go on to become the earth's bile, but not before I got a chance to take some final notes.
Every man is equal to himself in power. Not to abuse his gift but to uplift even the penurious man in rags. In the same way, no man wishes to be enslaved by the ignorance of others; no man desires to live in poverty. All men should wish to fight for what they believe in, providing it earns them respect. It is a sad truth, but you will find the color of a man’s skin becomes irrelevant only in the trifles of war.
Thousands upon thousands of venomous designs fashioned in concrete would create a calligraphic maze. The orange glow of the melting streetlight aided me in my hunt to locate the ones that were hiding. Jet black and semi-curly with a moray eel edge, they were alarmed by my presence. Like a lock of Medusa’s hair, they were everywhere. Spawning and reproducing within the confines of their own elaborate scheme was their domain in my elusive mind.
Twirling down ev’r, so brilliantly, they contracted and darted like a chain of myosin coming free from itself to spin madly. Filthy yet beautiful was the stunning inlay of this hoary tablet that seemed to support a brimming continent of weight.
Elapid patterns conceived in whimsy by the devil's own hand were illustrious portraits of the centuries lost in decay. Like ashes to ashes or dust to dust, there was no remorse. A superior being perhaps, but one still vulnerable to the autumnal hymn of motion.
Time is the enemy of man, but who is the enemy of time?
Who should be afraid of the murderer of 1846? Stand tall, for the enemy is dead!
And how can the man standing accused in 1412 repent? If he is going to repent, then let him do so quickly, for the next second is now.
What I saw from the design is that there is no time. There is nothing left.
I may very well lift up my glass and toast to your health, while you may very well see my great-grandchildren walking with canes. Everything that will come to be has done so, for we are merely remnants of a bygone day.
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Saleha Zainab - July 12 - Chapter 35
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The chapter presents an intricate and multifaceted narrative that shifts from the mundanity of everyday life into the realm of hallucinatory and esoteric exploration. Continuing the adventures, protagonist, alongside his friend John, encounters a surreal experience triggered by drug use, leading to a profound and disturbing introspection that blurs the lines between reality and fantasy. The writing style is rich with descriptive language, vivid imagery, and a blend of philosophical and existential musings.
Hades is a classical reference, in Greek mythology, Hades is the underworld, a place where souls go after death. It is often associated with darkness, the unknown, and the afterlife. The mention of Hades immediately sets a tone of mystery, foreboding, and a descent into darker, hidden realms.
The title suggests a metaphorical journey into the depths of the mind, uncovering hidden fears, desires, and truths. This is reflected in the narrator’s hallucinatory experience and existential reflections. By invoking Hades, the title also hints at themes of life, death, and |the afterlife, as well as the boundaries between reality and the supernatural. This connects with the narrator's musings on the nature of existence and time. The chapter explores the thin boundary between reality and hallucination, particularly through the lens of drug-induced experiences.
There is a strong undercurrent of existential questioning, with the protagonist grappling with the nature of existence, time, and the human condition. The text is laden with symbolic imagery and references to mysticism, suggesting a deeper, possibly supernatural significance to the protagonist’s experiences. The characters' actions and thoughts are driven by a growing sense of paranoia and fear, both of their immediate surroundings and the broader implications of their visions.
The author employs rich, sensory language to create an immersive and disorienting experience for the reader. The narrative often delves into a stream-of-consciousness mode, reflecting the fragmented and chaotic thought processes of the protagonist. There is a heavy use of symbolic and allegorical imagery, particularly in the depiction of the mysterious writings and the ensuing visions.
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